This ode outcome with one bait antecedent, two bait clarification follow by one bait lid on night of the day occurrence/sajak ini berkesudahan dgn 1 stanza pendahuluan 2 stanza penjelasan diikuti 1 stanza penutup pada malam hari kejadian.
Awan yang gelap,
membayangi petang yang malap,
air yang dilemparkan,
bergugusan dan berderai.
Broken heart feeling,
ennui came and bare all enragement,
thats remand in obsolescent heart,
nay-known, bewilder and mardy-grumpy,
Ketandusan jelas bangkit,
menggigil jari-jemari, terkujur badan,
mesin perasaan dan pemikiran rasional menjadi basi,
dan..kenapa semua ini haru berlaku?
Maybe, reminisce of nostalgia,
about my gullible atitude and low-grumption,
try to emend and pore over myself
via vis-a-vis to mirror with full of vim.
membayangi petang yang malap,
air yang dilemparkan,
bergugusan dan berderai.
Broken heart feeling,
ennui came and bare all enragement,
thats remand in obsolescent heart,
nay-known, bewilder and mardy-grumpy,
Ketandusan jelas bangkit,
menggigil jari-jemari, terkujur badan,
mesin perasaan dan pemikiran rasional menjadi basi,
dan..kenapa semua ini haru berlaku?
Maybe, reminisce of nostalgia,
about my gullible atitude and low-grumption,
try to emend and pore over myself
via vis-a-vis to mirror with full of vim.
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